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Young people are much more aware of and concerned about issues like the environment, poverty, and animal welfare than previous generations. What is your own opinion?

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Now
aday
Suggestion
a day
, the world has a lot of problems
such
 as polluted environment, poverty,
animals'
Suggestion
animal
 extinction what never have been seen before. Young people are much more aware of and concerned about the consequences of
such
 issues than previous generations. In my opinion, I agree with that idea. The
first
 reason, globalization trend provides information and knowledge for young people and helps them enhance their awareness. Due to the advancement of the technology and media plays a big role in making aware about these topics. Like
for example
, they are more in touch about these issues
such
 as spreading the awareness in the media and on the internet so that they can easily discuss with their friends (Facebook, online forums, blogs and etc.). They are capable to do
this
 because of the relevance as to what happen in the surroundings. The
second
 reason, they know that unless they protect natural resources
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
 their
next
 generation will not have resource living and development.
Therefore
, they will find methods so that
next
 generations still have enough natural resources, good environment to live. At present, many young scientists and young engineers are researching and discovering new resources and protection methods. The
third
 reason, a lot of calamities like storm, flood, drought and earthquake happen every year, which makes hundreds of people fall in difficulty. Many clubs and charities young people are very active. Voluntary youngsters will really appear and help victims through difficulty.
Besides
, living conditions are higher and higher, the young will care about more problems as: setting, wild animal and poverty. To illustrate, I totally agree with the idea that young people are more aware of and concerned about issues like polluted habitat, poverty and animal welfare than previous generations.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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