In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. what do you think are the cause of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
It cannot be denied that as people have become diet conscious, they are gaining body weight,
on the other hand
, due to sedentary lifestyles they are neglecting their physical fitness. This
essay would discuss the reasons, associated problems and steps to improve one’s health
.
First
and foremost, nowadays, people are spending majority
of their time in front of screens, which is leading to poor Suggestion
the majority
a majority
health
and various illnesses. It has been that when people work from home, and have jobs related to computers, they tend to sit more and due to this
passive kind of job, people are getting various health
issues. To illustrate, studies show that people who have non-physical job of eight hours, develop more physical problems. Moreover
, children who spend most of their time in front of cartoons, and mobiles, gain weight more easily than others.
Moreover
, there are some health
-related problems associated with such
lifestyle. It has been seen that people who do not move and indulge in any physical activity, develop obesity, cardio-vascular
diseases, and arthritis. It is evident from recent researches that not only adults, but children of or pertaining to or involving the heart and blood vessels
cardiovascular
also
are developing heart problems. For instance
, North America, although
, it is developed country, it has a wide number of children suffering from diabetes and obesity. People consume junk food more than an average, which leads to various diseases.
However
, this
situation can be controlled, if proper measures would be taken by the people and health
authorities. Primarily, every day, sixty minutes of physical activities should be made mandatory for school children, on one hand, whereas on the other hand
, health
clubs and gyms
membership should be subsidized, to become feasible for everyone. Suggestion
gym
gym's
For example
, provincial government
can offer discounted gym monthly pass, and Suggestion
a provincial government
the provincial government
provincial governments
moreover
, and health
talks can be aired on radio stations and TV channels to make people aware of the problems associated with overweight.
In conclusion, people are consuming healthy diet
as directed by the dieticians and doctors, but they are not engaging in physical activities, which is the root cause of all the Suggestion
a healthy diet
health
problems. Therefore
, if people take the correct measures then
their average life span could increase and conjunction used in comparatives
than
thus
, lead a healthy life.Submitted by Meenakshi libran gal on
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