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In many parts of the world there is continuous coverage of sports on television. Some people believe this discourages the young from taking part in any sport themselves. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

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The craze of sports is ever rising all around the globe and the
television
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 has acted as a catalyst for increasing viewer ship of the different sports.
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, many people have an opinion that, due to
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 rise in viewer ship, the children are not taking active
part
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 in the sports. In my opinion,
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 not the case and I feel due to increase in the telecast of the sports more teenagers are actively participating in it.
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 with, live streaming of sports binds people to the edge of their seats as the sport are very much exciting, but, these
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also has
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 some negative consequences.
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, getting entertainment while sitting at one place in a comfort zone, discourages young ones to play sports as they have to work hard.
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, in my home there is a large projector connected to the T.V. By which I can watch cricket on a large screen which give me a lot of joy, but I don't like to play it as it requires much hard work and dedication.
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, these are one of the reasons why
television
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 discourages children to take active participation in sports. In my opinion, I feel that, due to increase in the live streaming of sports, more and more young children are attracted to take
part
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 in different kinds of sports as it is fun and if you reach at topmost level you can earn name as well as fame.
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, cricket is like relegion in my country and almost 90% of kids wants to become cricketer in their young age and their idols are Sachin Tendulkar, Virat Kholi, M S Dhoni which are like the huge icons in my country and there popularity, urge kids to take
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 in cricket and like that football has Ronaldo, Messi, Pele which attracts the childrens to actively involve in sports.
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, I feel, with sports telecast increasing on the
television
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, it enables children to play sports rather than just watching it on TV. To conclude, I don't think the forecasting sports on
television
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 will discourages children to not play sports, but I feel opposite of it and it actually encourages children to take
part
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 in different sports as marketing of sports are done through it.
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