You went to your friend house and had meal. Write a letter to your friend thanking him and his family for the meal. 1) Tell what you enjoyed about the meal. 2) Thanks to his parents and what you think about them 3) suggest arrangements for his invite at your place.

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Hello Mahmoud, I hope you're doing well. I just wanted to thank you and your family for the wonderful meal

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week. I thoroughly enjoyed everything, especially the traditional couscous, which was absolutely delicious.

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, the chocolate-flavoured cheesecake was a perfect way to end the meal! Please extend my thanks to your mother, as she is an excellent cook, and it was a pleasure meeting her. She has

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a warm and generous personality. Your dad,

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, is hilarious, and I really appreciated his humour throughout the evening. I would love to return the favour and invite you and your family over to my house next Saturday for dinner. My family is eager to meet you, and we would love to spend some quality time together. Let me know if that works for you. Thanks again, and I’m looking forward to seeing you soon! Best regards, Mariam

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task achievement

Consider adding a little more detail about the specific aspects of the meal that you enjoyed, such as the flavors or the way it was presented.

coherence and cohesion

Make sure that each paragraph has a clear main idea and that the transition between them feels smooth.

task achievement

The letter has a warm and friendly tone, which is appropriate for personal correspondence.

coherence and cohesion

Great job on the clear structure of your letter with an effective greeting and closing.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

150 words

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