Currently, the whole world is under the grip of pandemic Corona. Some countries have implemented immediate total lockdown while other countries have adopted different means to counter. Should total lockdown be implemented instantly or not ?

The existence of human beings has been terrorised by many perilous decease in the past. At the present time, once again we are Under the threat of the Novel corona virus. In retaliation to the current situation, many countries have taken several measures,

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as a complete or partial

lockdown

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This

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essay will illustrate some of the necessary precautions that need to be taken to curb the spreading of

covid

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and foremost USP step, we strictly follow the guideline of the World Health Organization (WHO), that says, social distancing is the sole weapon at the primary level to break

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corona virus spreading. In implementation of that, total

lockdown

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is the best way, which won't allow any public activity in our surrounding. The other prima facie believes is that, corona virus cannot survive on any surface for more

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then

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24 hours and

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, during the period strict

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, all the containment area or any infected surfaces will be left untouched and it is an enormous success toward the prevention of

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-19. For an example of the Whulan city, which is the epicentre of

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virus, it was kept under rigid

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for 65 days since the virus has been declared an epidemic in China.

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, that region has no more than 20 cases after 15 days of

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begin.

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, some other effective precautions are adopted by some countries and

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under the guideline of WHO.

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, Keep

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around you and not to touch here and there for no reason. Adding more into these, use

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sanitizer containing more than 60% alcohol to kill the virus that comes in your contact and most importantly, do not touch your eyes, mouth and nose without washing your

hand

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for at least 20 seconds because those are the only ways that the virus can get entered into our body. To recapitulate all the important measures to curb

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deadly virus, total

lockdown

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is believed to be most effective by myriad countries along with other consideration

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as social distancing, use of

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Sanitizer and proper

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wash.

YASH CHAUHAN

Jul 24, 2020

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

5.5

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Relevant & specific examples

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349 words

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