Too much money is wasted on repairing old buildings that should be used to knock them down and build new ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today, saving older houses are
become
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becoming
more popular than building new apartments. In my opinion, I agree that people must save old buildings for future
generation
Accept comma addition
generation, such
such
as
special
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a special attraction
attraction
on open air and
history
museum.
First
of all, many people can
visited
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visit
this
museum
that is
why
or
of or belonging to us
our
children can
saw
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see
living people in the past.
This
means that many young people
be
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are
are being
knows interesting information about historical moments their ancestors.
For example
, Tomsk older houses in Russia have
big
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a big history
history
for
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in
of
our memory and the knowledge because it shows us how lived our ancestors. Without
history buildings
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history, buildings
historic buildings
historic historic buildings
historical buildings
, many cities will be built new high apartments or big shops
centers
a period of 100 years
centuries
centres
centre
by people.
This
means that, many people
be
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are
able to discuss children about
history
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historical
historic
buildings in their
city
or
country
. Another point to consider is that people can use information about their historical
attraction
in their
city
or
country
for attracting new tourists.
In other words
, many tourists will go
city
for visiting historical
attraction
that is
why each tourist who visited it can improve economic
city
. Without
history
attraction
in different
city
, many people
be
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are
able spent money in others places.
For example
, many tourists of different
country
visited Russia
history
attraction
in
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
city
that is
why they help increase economic our
country
.
Thus
, attracting tourists can help our government in getting a lot of money. In conclusion, I think that a great amount of people should save their old buildings for future generation and maintain economic
country
.
Submitted by Julia on

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