Too much money is wasted on repairing old buildings that should be used to knock them down and build new ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Today, saving older houses are
become
more popular than building new apartments. In my opinion, I agree that people must save old buildings for future Suggestion
becoming
generation
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generation, such
such
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special
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a special attraction
attraction
on open air and Use synonyms
history
museum.
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of all, many people can Linking Words
visited
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visit
this
museum Linking Words
that is
why Linking Words
or
children can of or belonging to us
our
saw
living people in the past. Suggestion
see
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be
knows interesting information about historical moments their ancestors. Suggestion
are
are being
For example
, Tomsk older houses in Russia have Linking Words
big
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a big history
history
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for
our memory and the knowledge because it shows us how lived our ancestors. Without Suggestion
in
of
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history buildings
, many cities will be built new high apartments or big shops Suggestion
history, buildings
historic buildings
historic historic buildings
historical buildings
centers
by people. a period of 100 years
centuries
centres
centre
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means that, many people Linking Words
be
able to discuss children about Suggestion
are
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history
buildings in their Suggestion
historical
historic
city
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country
.
Another point to consider is that people can use information about their historical Use synonyms
attraction
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country
for attracting new tourists. Use synonyms
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, many tourists will go Linking Words
city
for visiting historical Use synonyms
attraction
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that is
why each tourist who visited it can improve economic Linking Words
city
. Without Use synonyms
history
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attraction
in different Use synonyms
city
, many people Use synonyms
be
able spent money in others places. Suggestion
are
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, many tourists of different Linking Words
country
visited Russia Use synonyms
history
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attraction
in Use synonyms
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
city
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that is
why they help increase economic our Linking Words
country
. Use synonyms
Thus
, attracting tourists can help our government in getting a lot of money.
In conclusion, I think that a great amount of people should save their old buildings for future generation and maintain economic Linking Words
country
.Use synonyms
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