You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

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Nowadays, many persons think that history is not a useful font of information to understand humans being, while others believe the contrary. In my opinion, I totally disagree with those think that history is not important, since the past is the most significant source of knowledge for learning and, I will discuss
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following essay. History is a fundamental way to learn from the actions committed in the past by humans. In fact, there are several reasons for looking at the back.
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of all, keeping the peace in the world. Throughout many years humans fought many wars and
we saw that have
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saw that we have
brought the death of millions of civilians, among them children, soldiers and disruption.
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, learning about
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to happen
in Germany or in Poland where people killed other people just to impose their supremacy, enrich people about their understandings on various
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aspects
of the world. From another angle, being skilled about our ancestors is helpful
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for other aspects,
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as medicine, or science which are subjects made a lot improvements over
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the centuries
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, the discovered of the antibiotic in 1921 represented a revolution in the
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medical
field and opened the path for new treatments.
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, people didn't die
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diseases
like pneumonia, bronchitis and other type of illnesses, that currently seems are not a
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for our health owing to the sacrifices made in the past. In conclusion, history is not just important, is the most fundamental aspect of human's life and it
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should be appreciated
not only because is a way to
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for better understanding the differences between the modern and
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old life style
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