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Some schools are very strict about their school uniforms and the appearance of their students, while other schools have a very relaxed dress code. What are the advantages and disadvantages of children of having a school uniform?

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Today, some schools are strict about their
school
uniform
, while others allow their students to wear what they like. The advantage and disadvantage of having a
school
uniform
 will be explained. One of the most advantages of being strict about
school
 uniforms is the sense of equality. Clothes are considered as a status symbol.
Consequently
, many rich students who wear a luxury brand clothes make fun of their poor classmates who cannot catch the newest clothing.
School
uniform
 puts everyone closer and equality.
Furthermore
, if you know exactly what you should wear to
school
, you can save time in preparing clothes to
school
. And if everyone wears the same dress-code, that can help them develop the unity and the cohesion.
On the other hand
, there is some disadvantage of being strict dress code at
school
.
Firstly
, the clothes are the way for students show their personal style and who they are. Having a strict
uniform
academy
a secondary school (usually private)
Academy
 means they cannot choice what they wears and that can lead to the depression.
In addition
, some students do not want to wear dress code and the feel like being forced to wear uniforms and loss of freedom.
Secondly
, not all
uniform
 is well-designed. There is some case where students refuse to put their
school
 clothes simply out of date. Overall, student’s morale will be decreased and it can be affected by the quality of learning. In conclusion, strict about their
school
uniform
 have some benefits are sense of equality, save time and togetherness, but still have some drawbacks are students cannot show their character and
uniform
 out of date can be reduced quality of learning.
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