Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than work for a company or organization. Might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
To begin
, these days a lot of people prefer to work
for themselves rather than for a corporation or organization. It has some pros and cons which I will discuss in the bullet points in the forthcoming paragraphs.
However
, there are many reasons that people prefer to choose their self-work
first,
individuals work
on their own they don't want to work
under any other person
. Second,
the flexibility of time is available for self-employment a person
can take leave on their wish and can go early home without any restriction. Third,
people become more self-independent by earning more money
and self-reliance. For example
, A freelancer can earn a large amount of money
by working on many projects and according to
suitable working hours.
Moreover
, self-employment has some disadvantages along with
these advantages such
as bankruptcy and social problems. To start a business
an individual has to take a loan from the bank and after some time due to
many reasons consequences occur the business
is not going well so all the money
goes to waste and the person
bankrupt. Also
, after opening an own business
social problems occur such
as isolation from the family due to
workload and the person
may go into depression due to
not proper work
. For example
, A person
takes a 50 lakh loan from the bank and starts a TV business
unluckily the business
is not going well all the money
goes to waste and he goes into depression.
To conclude
, nowadays, individuals choose to work
for their own rather than for any Association. I agree with the statement because of the plateau of work
, self-reliance, and self-independence. Nevertheless
, some cons like loss of money
and social issues.Submitted by psingh8059 on
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
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- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
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