Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only Government and large companies can make difference. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

Many people think that only the Government
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Accept space
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key organizations plays vital role in keeping the environment conditions, health, whereas individuals lack the responsibility and knowledge to keep the atmosphere in a wealthy condition. Individuals are lazy enough to make sure that their nearby places are hygiene enough and always Companies and public servants take additional care to do so.
This
essay talks about my opinion towards the Government, Industries and public role in improving the climate conditions. Public
also
plays a key part in maintaining the environment healthy. The majority of the people are actively participating in plantation programmes which will help to reduce the global warming.
For example
, NCC camps and college unions are organizing the plantation programmes to improve the awareness in the society. Another point is individuals are actively involved in cleaning the lakes/ or ponds in the nearby locality to avoid contaminating the water. A group of youngsters is identifying the remote areas or places where the rain storage is contaminated due to waste particles or dust coming from outside and cleaning the same to keep the water clean and pure. Governments and Large companies
also plays
Suggestion
also play
an important aspect in keeping the surroundings safe and they are contributing the budget to clean the remote areas, distributing the plants so that people can plant in nearby areas and it increases the oxygen level. Many of the IT organizations are contributing quarterly budget for these kind of initiatives as the pollution free environment is the main for health conditions.
Also
, they are conducting awareness programs, workshops so that all of their employees play a major performance towards swatch mission. In conclusion, Government, Organization and public plays equal role in improving the conditions. I myself have attended workshops, events conducted by my organization for cleaning of the nearby lake where people are suffering a lot due to contaminated water. As an individual, I have attended few more cleanings and a plantation program with a group of friends as part of public initiatives.
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