Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business, and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

“Selfishness” is now a common personality in every human being and
also
a country.
Nation
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The nation
and their citizens are mad behind taking the appreciation behind an achievement, and so they believe in not sharing any information regarding scientific research, business or academic. Whereas, others claim that it is good to share these information’s.
This
essay will outline both the views and a reasonable conclusion is provided. It is interesting to note that, there are more than 200 countries on
this
planet. All these nations may have a friendly relation, but behind the scene is not how it looks; everyone is in a race. Countries do not share many of their information in order to discover something new.
In addition
, sharing their information’s can be misused against
there
of them or themselves
their
own boundaries.
For example
, there are many cases when countries face cyber attacks due to leakage of data.
Hence
, it is important to protect it.
Furthermore
, to create profit and monopoly in the market, businesses
also
do the same. As blackmailing and other incidents are quite usual, it is not safe to share facts. To
this
note, data
is kept
Suggestion
are kept
secure by whom it belongs to.
On the other hand
, if data
is shared
Suggestion
are shared
and utilized properly, than for sure fantastic results can be seen. Teachers always say, “Sharing is caring”. Undoubtedly, there is still need of many new innovations that can improve the quality of
human race
Suggestion
the human race
. By sharing scientific research, many drugs can be invented.
Furthermore
, businesses can
also
grow quicker.
However
, there is only one top position, which is temporary. To conclude, I concede that data should not be shared as barely one can trust
on
Suggestion
in
others. Despite that, technological advancement can be made on the previous ones in
this
scientific world.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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