Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business, and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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“Selfishness” is now a common personality in every human being and

also

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a country.

Nation

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The nation

and their citizens are mad behind taking the appreciation behind an achievement, and so they believe in not sharing any information regarding scientific research, business or academic. Whereas, others claim that it is good to share these information’s.

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essay will outline both the views and a reasonable conclusion is provided. It is interesting to note that, there are more than 200 countries on

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planet. All these nations may have a friendly relation, but behind the scene is not how it looks; everyone is in a race. Countries do not share many of their information in order to discover something new.

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, sharing their information’s can be misused against

there

of them or themselves

their

own boundaries.

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, there are many cases when countries face cyber attacks due to leakage of data.

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, it is important to protect it.

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, to create profit and monopoly in the market, businesses

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do the same. As blackmailing and other incidents are quite usual, it is not safe to share facts. To

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note, data

is kept

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are kept

secure by whom it belongs to.

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, if data

is shared

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are shared

and utilized properly, than for sure fantastic results can be seen. Teachers always say, “Sharing is caring”. Undoubtedly, there is still need of many new innovations that can improve the quality of

human race

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the human race

. By sharing scientific research, many drugs can be invented.

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, businesses can

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grow quicker.

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, there is only one top position, which is temporary. To conclude, I concede that data should not be shared as barely one can trust

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others. Despite that, technological advancement can be made on the previous ones in

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scientific world.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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292 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

information sharing
scientific research
business
academic world
advancement of knowledge
progress
collaboration
cross-disciplinary research
open access
democratization of information
transparency
credibility
intellectual property
security concerns
commercial interests

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business, and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Your opinion

Today, more and more people are waiting until their thirties to get married and have children. Do you think it is a positive or negative trend?

At the present time, thepopulation of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Today more and more people want things instantly (eg: goods, service, news). Why is this? Is it positive or negative development?