A person worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old fashion values such as honor, kindness and trust no longer seem important. To what extent you agree or disagree
In today’s world, a person is evaluated by his belongings and status in
society
. While
, some people
are impressed by the financial position of others, traditional value holders are trusted with huge responsibilities and applauded by society
, in general. Those who exhibit high moral values are considered role models.
Men of principles hold a paramount position in society
and people
tend to show unparalleled trust in them. Although
a small fraction of society
is impressed by the financial position of some masses, individuals who are on the highest pedestal of character have significant followers. For example
, a general election held in 2024 in Pakistan revealed that the general masses voted for a political figure who was free from financial corruption and always stood on moral ethics. Consequently
, traditional value holders are entrusted with responsibilities.
Orthodox value system based on honour, kindness and trust is still viewed as prestigious and appreciated by people
. Although
material possessions have a sparkling effect, people
know that all glitters are not gold. Societies are built upon the footprints of men of character who display the highest degree of integrity and show kindness and in return, these values are appreciated and celebrated by the people
. For example
, a philanthropist in India had a huge followership and he earned unmatched and unprecedented respect in his life. Resultantly, he received enormous funding from the public and rendered exceptional services for humanity.
In the modern era, people
are assessed on their material possessions and societal placement. On one hand, some people
get influenced by these worldly attributes but on the other hand
, people
with character are considered trustworthy for the discharge of special duties and they are treasured.Submitted by munazzashahid369 on
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