You share a parking area with several neighbours and have recently started having problems. Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area. In that letter • explaining the problems • suggesting ways to help the situation • proposing a possible meeting

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Dear neighbours, My name is Rishi and I have been living in

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C in B-222 since 2018.

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letter is to notify you of the issue that I am experiencing recently related to parking space. As

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is a residential area so there are many parking slots available for the residents. But, from

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last

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I have noticed that the regular spot where I used to park is not empty anymore and if I try to look for another one it is usually quite far from my compound.

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, there was

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a day when someone parked in front of my car making it impossible for me to get my car out,

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result

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I had to bear scoldings from my boss. So,

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have come up with a few ideas to resolve

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issue and best be done if talked face-to-face. I proposed a meeting

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weekend on Saturday 25 August in the parking zone at 10am. Just to give a general idea of the situation is to

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a parking slot to each member of a resident which will avoid any

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issue like

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, along with a few empty ones for the relatives or visitors. I hope that you agree with me and do let me know if

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the meeting

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. Yours sincerely, Rishi

harmanmalhi1313Wed Aug 05 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

222 words

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