Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

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Hi Sarah, I hope all is well and good. I received your letter yesterday stating the noise issue from our home and I want to apologise to you for it. Well,
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and my husband were out of town for
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seminar in London for about a week. During
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time Riya organised a party at our home without informing us. The music blaring from the speakers would have caused you many problems and I am sorry for that once again. I understand that we live in a society and need to be much more responsible and look out for others peace
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. I can assure you that something like
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will not happen again and as for Riya, she is grounded for another whole month. She will not repeat
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in future again. Even she will be coming to your house tomorrow to say how sorry she is and promise you that she will not commit
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time. I hope you forgive her and me and I would like to propose a dinner
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weekend to make it up
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you. Do let me know what you think? See you soon, Nina
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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