Advertising is all around us; it is an unavoidable part of everyone’ life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?/

Today's modern world evolves host of advertisement around. Is it a good sign? Let's discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the hoardings around us. A brand, either bread or a car need to reach everyone, can be possible, only by advertisements. Every year, small companies as well as corporate have their own slice of budget to promote their products in the form of ads. The latest century, which we could say, an advanced new age saw a transition from physical banners to online banners. The most annoying thing, that most people could feel, when they saw an ad while using a mobile phone. At the same time, people are cheerful to see a huge banner with glowing lights on the streets. The advantages are enormous, advertisements bring us so many products and give us the option to choose the right one, which is suitable for everyone need. A product can be globally known through advertisement, at the same time, it is mandatory, it can be allowed be allowed to an extent, which does not affect an individual's privacy.
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