Some people think that certain criminals should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind the bar. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is thought that offenders should do volunteer activities

instead

Linking Words

of sending to confinement. While I accept that people should be created more opportunities for juvenile delinquents who commit minor crimes, participants in volunteer work. I

also

Linking Words

believe that

prison

Use synonyms

is the best deterrent for serious criminals who commit serious crimes

such

Linking Words

as robbery, homicides, aggravated assaults. On the one hand, there are several reasons why minor crime lawbreakers should do unsalaried work.

First

Linking Words

,

instead

Linking Words

of imprisonment rehabilitation programs in communities are more effective for those who are juvenile delinquents and minor crime people to become productive members of

society

Use synonyms

.

Second

Linking Words

, the mandatory volunteer activities would make offenders useful in their local communities.

For instance

Linking Words

, they can clean streets, plant trees, help old people or engage in producing products.

This

Linking Words

may result in

reduction

Suggestion

a reduction

in the number of social workers needed in communities and contribute to bring benefits to

society

Use synonyms

.

On the other hand

Linking Words

, those who commit serious

offenses

a lack of politeness; a failure to show regard for others; wounding the feelings or others

offences

such

Linking Words

as homicides, aggravated assaults, murder pose a serious threat to

society

Use synonyms

should sent to

prison

Use synonyms

.

First

Linking Words

, in the long term confinement acts as a deterrent for criminals after they are released from

prison

Use synonyms

they would not

reoffend

money returned to a payer

refund

offend

. In the penitentiary, prisoners have to keep away from the community to ensure security for innocent people and force them to attend rehabilitation programs

such

Linking Words

as plant trees, clean the prisons, vocational training.

As a result

Linking Words

, offenders would recognize their wrongdoing and change the awareness to become useful citizens to

society

Use synonyms

after they are released. In conclusion, it is beneficial for minor

crime people

Accept comma addition

crime, people

to take

Suggestion

take

part in volunteering

instead

Linking Words

of receiving

prison

Use synonyms

sentences and people who pose a serious threat to communities should be sent to

prison

Use synonyms

.