The best way to solve world’s environment problem is to increase the cost of fuel. Do you agree or disagree and give your own opinion

It is a popular belief

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that raising the

price of

gasolene

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gasoline

is the best solution of

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environmental

concern. While

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is adverse to some extent,

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do more good than harm. There are a variety of reasons explaining why the price of petrol should be increased.

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,

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higher

cost of

fuel

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would directly discourage the utilization of private vehicles and promote the popularity of public transports. Specifically, the financial burdens which are created from

higher tax

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higher taxes

a higher tax

on petrol enable people to use public transport as an alternative, in

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less emission released into the air.

Futhermore

in addition

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would relieve many roads from

heavy traffic

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the heavy traffic

by reducing the large amount of vehicles as well as impeding the process of air pollution and global warming.

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,

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advancement paves the way for replacing fossil

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with “green” energy sources, which will become more attractive financially. Without

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practice, people would still depend on the use of personal vehicles, which is the culprit of air pollution and several respiratory

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problems

caused by

exhaust

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the exhaust

.

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,

goverment

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the government

government

could use the money earned to deal with the different environmental issue.

Particurlarly

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Particularly

, the authority might have to devote a large money earned of

goverment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

budget to invest in renewable energy from solar, wind or water, which are proven to be an optimal option to replace fossil

fuel

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due to its safety.

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, greater fund would be invested

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in

developing technologies and infrastructure that will minimize the emission of

cacbon

an abundant nonmetallic tetravalent element occurring in three allotropic forms: amorphous carbon and graphite and diamond; occurs in all organic compounds

carbon

footprints. Admittedly, the increase in

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cost unable to

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solve the world’s environment problem like the world population keeps climbing rapidly.

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, with the population control methods of the government,

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issue would be addressed. In conclusion,

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regardless of, in defiance of

despite

some advantages that other methods provided. I am completely convinced with by the fact that the benefit of

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higher

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is more outstanding.