"Developed countries have created many environmental problems. What can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming?".

#countries #dangers

In recent times

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developments in advanced nations have resulted in an abundance of climatic issues including global warming.

This

essay will explore how

this

problem can be tackled through strict

government

policies for energy plants to decrease

pollution

, by enhancing public

transport

and

awareness

of people through media campaigns.

Firstly

, through

government

policies for energy plants in order to reduce

pollution

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this

problem can be curbed to a large extent.As

government

regulations in terms of reduction in waste disposal by power plants, would almost certainly reduce the global warming.Take an example of Peru

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where by imposing strict laws on power stations by

government

has led to significant reduction in

pollution

Thus

, local

government

through effective policies can help decrease

this

issue.

Secondly

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global warming can be curtailed to a large extent by promoting public

transport

.As by enhancing public

transport

as opposed to self

transport

will not only reduce the

pollution but

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pollution, but

also

reduce the traffic problems.

For instance

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public

transport

in Beijing has remarkably reduced the air

pollution

Hence

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enhancement of public

transport

can likely result in the reduction of global warming.

Finally

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global warming can be tackled to a greater extent by

awareness

programmes for people. As

awareness

programmes broadcasted on popular media and mainstream literature can help reduce

this

menace and it will benefit the mankind in the long run. To sum up

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I believe that global warming is indeed a grave problem across the world and I believe it can be curtailed through strict

government

policies, by promoting public

transport

and

awareness

campaigns and

this

practice should be done.

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Clear and correct grammar

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