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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#people #choices
Many individuals have the opinion that we have a wide selection of options to choose from. With the many advances that we as humans have made, a wide variety of opportunities has brought on several choices that we are now able to make from
day
 to
day
 activities, to travelling
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This
 essay will explain on my agreement with the
statment
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statement
. The advancements of technology
has
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have
 made everything around us more accessible in the comforts of our own home. A simple download on our
smart phones
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smartphones
 allows us to access information, food and even shopping. We are
then
 able to make
comparsions
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comparisons
 within these sources over what might fit our budget or might interest us. These applications have several versions where sellers often compete with others to ensure sales of their products.
This
 benefits consumers who are looking out for good deals and often spoilt for choices. Travel has
also
 benefitted greatly from these advancements and it has opened up to lower and
middle income
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middle-income
 families. As holiday packages have become more affordable, short getaways are now made
availabe
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available
 for families to choose from. A three
day
 trip,
for example
, to
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the
Maldives is now far cheaper compared to 10 years ago. Costing an average of 100 Singapore dollars a
day
, many can choose to travel comfortably. In conclusion, with the many advancements that have been made by mankind, the vast
opportunites
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opportunities
 starting from basic needs to travel are endless. We can only anticipate
to be
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being
 spoilt
further
 in time to come.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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