Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many individuals have the opinion that we have a wide selection of options to choose from. With the many advances that we as humans have made, a wide variety of opportunities has brought on several choices that we are now able to make from
activities, to travelling
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essay will explain on my agreement with the
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. The advancements of technology
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made everything around us more accessible in the comforts of our own home. A simple download on our
smart phones
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allows us to access information, food and even shopping. We are
able to make
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within these sources over what might fit our budget or might interest us. These applications have several versions where sellers often compete with others to ensure sales of their products.
benefits consumers who are looking out for good deals and often spoilt for choices. Travel has
benefitted greatly from these advancements and it has opened up to lower and
middle income
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families. As holiday packages have become more affordable, short getaways are now made
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for families to choose from. A three
for example
, to
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Maldives is now far cheaper compared to 10 years ago. Costing an average of 100 Singapore dollars a
, many can choose to travel comfortably. In conclusion, with the many advancements that have been made by mankind, the vast
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starting from basic needs to travel are endless. We can only anticipate
to be
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in time to come.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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