Many museums charge for admission, while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admissions to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

The main disadvantage is that high fees exclude a large proportion of the population, especially in less developed countries. Many people in poor countries have just enough

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for food and shelter. Exhibits are one of the few cultural activities they can enjoy free of charge.

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, Egypt has millions of people living in poverty, but

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a rich and ancient culture and it is

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important that everyone gets to experience these artefacts. Another big negative is that students and children who are learning about the world may not be able to visit. It would be a huge shame if art students could not see their favourite painters or sculptor’s work in real life because their finances could not cover the cost.

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, there are some who say that museums are unsustainable without the

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they might get from ticket sales. They say that

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allows the building to remain open and it is better than some people get to experience it, rather than none at all. To

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I would say that the government should step in and cover the cost because

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culture is as important as anything else it spends

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, in the UK there have been huge government spending cuts over the

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few years, but the museums have not had their funding reduced because of their importance to the country’s cultural heritage.