Historical objects should be brought back to their country of origin. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people opine that the historical artefacts should be returned to the country of origin which were captured during wars or colonialization while others argue that it should remain where it is right now. I agree with the former view and
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, many people have sentiments and emotions attached to the objects which were taken away from their country in the past. Linking Words
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exhibits the nation history and cultural values. Linking Words
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, during the British rule in India, the idol of Lord Vishnu was stolen from the temple and is now being displayed in a museum of London. Many people believe that the ideal place of the statue should be the temple from where it was stolen rather than a museum. Due to Linking Words
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many Indian citizens are putting pressure on the government to bring those items back.
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, these items can be used as a remedy for building and improving the relationship between the two countries. Linking Words
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, it helps to bring peace and harmony between them. Linking Words
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, when the ties between France and Egypt were not at their best, Prime minister of France decided to return mummies which were captured during World War I to Egypt in order to normalise their relationship. Due to Linking Words
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gesture of goodwill, bilateral talks resumed between these two sovereign states after a decade.
To conclude, bringing back the historical artefacts not only boost the relationship between states but Linking Words
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brings happiness in the society as many sentiments and culture values are attached to it.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
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- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
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- however
- although
- even though
- despite