International travel agencies are going to reduce their fees for people. Do you think its advantages outweigh the disadvantages? (approximately 250 words)
It is true that the cost of
travel
has fallen a lot compared to previous times thanks to globalization and international Use synonyms
travel
agencies have followed Use synonyms
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trend in terms of their services price as well. While Linking Words
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phenomenon can cause some potential problems, I think the benefits are more significant.
On the one hand, there are some defects to international Linking Words
travel
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Firstly
, the cheaper price makes it easy for international Linking Words
travel
agencies to draw attention from people. Tourist destinations would witness a huge flux of travellers, which could provoke the adverse influence on the locations Use synonyms
such
as littering indiscriminately, pollution of air and water, and vandalism of public property. A specific example of Linking Words
this
could be the Great Wall of China where suffers tourist numbers causing parts falling into disrepair while other parts have been knocked down to give rise to roads or developments. Linking Words
Secondly
, the low price could lead to poor quality Linking Words
tourism
services. Many international Use synonyms
travel
agencies provide cheap Use synonyms
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deals to their clients, but in reality, they are substandard services, and consumers do not reach the desired satisfaction as their expectation. A bad experience could ruin relaxation and leave displeased memories for travellers.
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On the other hand
, despite many negative impacts, there are tremendous perks as well. Linking Words
Tourism
plays a crucial role in the development of the global economy as the fastest-growing industry. The lower Use synonyms
travel
fare could be a good measure to stimulate Use synonyms
tourism
demand by boosting people to explore new places in different countries. One of the biggest benefits of Use synonyms
tourism
is the ability to obtain income through foreign exchange earnings. The money that the countries accumulate in Use synonyms
this
could Linking Words
then
be reinvested in public services Linking Words
such
as education or healthcare to pave the way for better life of people. Another advantage could be that international Linking Words
tourism
leads to employment creation. Use synonyms
Tourism
generates jobs directly through hotels, restaurants, nightclubs, taxis, and souvenir sales, and indirectly through the supply of goods and services needed by Use synonyms
tourism
-related businesses. It could be efficacious for governments to minimize the unemployment rate and to help employees in the sector to satisfy their family needs and Use synonyms
therefore
contributing to the wealth and development of the region.
In conclusion, while the benefits that come with the reduction of international Linking Words
travel
fare could counteract its possible disadvantages, governments and people of each country and each locality should work on managing the protection and conservation of national heritage for the development of sustainable Use synonyms
tourism
around the world.Use synonyms
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Word Count
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