Planting trees is very important for the environment. Some people say trees should be planted in the vacant area of cities and towns .while other believe housing facilities should be built instead. Do agree or disagree?

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lanted in the vacant areas for

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nvironment. Other people believe houses or apartments built in

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vacant areas for people. I agree

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both perspectives. In modern society

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we have both problems, not only

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nvironment but

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opulation

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. On the one hand, Citizen's life of quality will be improved by a lot of trees. In many

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shows green

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makes people feel relaxed and calmed. So, many people love to get rest in

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orest or park.

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citizen's mental health and physical health. I think

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mportant thing to

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ation.

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etropolitan

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roblem of high

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opulation

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, many people have to go move out to rural even their

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is in the city.

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, we should build apartments and houses in vacant areas for people. So I think, we should

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many trees around buildings and houses when they built. Conclusion, we should build houses

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for environments of cities and citizen. Providing that place

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roof top

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garden on a top of

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uilding, it could help

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both problems. In

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, buildings around with green

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, the buildings will have better aesthetic view than

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nly building built.