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Advertising encourages consumers to buy in quantity rather than promoting quality. To what extent do you agree or disagree

#consumers #quantity #quality
Commercialization of any
product
 plays an essential role in the sale of
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roduct.It is said by some individuals that advertisement
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 us the basic features of good which guide people to choose the right quality of any
product
.In my perspective ,I completely agree with the aforementioned statement and my viewpoint will be elaborated in the aforementioned paragraphs.
To begin
 with,All the add companies show only positive features of any
product
 which inspires the consumers to buy that
product
 especially when these products are endorsed by celebrities because people are attracted towards them,and in these only positive qualities of any products are shown which represents the only good
characterstics
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characteristics
 of any commodity.
For instance
, a survey was conducted in India in 2017 and it had concluded that seventy
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 companies in India tell the consumers about the basic
characterstics
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characteristics
 of any
product
 which influence the sale of that particular
product
.
Furthermore
,the main motive of these advertisement companies is to make people aware
about
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 the availability of that
product
 in the market and educate people to only buy those products which are recognised by
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overnment of India. To recapitulate, I would like to write that consumers should focus on the quality of
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roduct rather than quantity.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pervasiveness
  • mislead
  • economic benefits
  • product longevity
  • durability
  • differentiate
  • craftsmanship
  • targeted advertising
  • flash sales
  • limited-time offers
  • consumer base
  • consumer awareness
  • narrative
  • manufacturing process
  • environmental impact
  • psychological triggers
  • fear of missing out (FOMO)
  • rational decisions
  • allure
  • amass
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