Many people are afraid to leave home because of crimes. Some believe that more action should be taken to prevent crimes, but others feel little can be done. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

Enthusiasm for discussing the rise in the
crime
rate is at
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ll-time high, not least in the cities as offenders rob a young lady while she was walking on the small path, alone. As with all the violation of the law, there is some debate about whether
this
situation demands
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action
. On the one hand, some people advocate that more control measures, which focus on
crime
preventing, should be taken. Increasing the presence of
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olice officer is a good deterrent.
Police
officers are being given powers to help combat
crime
. People who have the purpose to commit a
crime
might think twice when the local
police
force is strong and well organized. Declaring strict laws can
also
prevent
crime
.
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fine and long prison term might make people feel afraid to violate laws and get punishment.
On the other hand
, some people believe that
although
taking
action
can have significant effects, there is nothing
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an be done right now. Curbing crimes is a long-term strategy. The strategy not only needs to use
police
force and laws to deter people from breaking the laws
,
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but
also
needs to focus on
reduce
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u
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the

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nemployment rate and improve people’s safety awareness. It means that it
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to be a comprehensive plan rather than a single aspect
action
. From another point of view, it
also
shows that to improve
police
force and make the community a safer place to live is meaningful from a long-term perspective. In conclusion, I believe more
action
should be taken to tackle the problem of crimes. Focusing on
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hort period result would not be the best way to solve the problem. The challenge for combating crimes is to find the right long-term plans.
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