Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree?

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Globalisation has led to the fast development of an economy which in turn has reduced the cost of goods but it's
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a major reason for creating rubbish. The amount of junk created isn’t the amount we can dispose of. It can have a tremendous impact on our environment if not controlled properly. We’ll discuss why’s it happening in the
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paragraph. It’s happening because the younger generation is more accustomed to buying a new product
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of fixing it. In my mother’s time, they used to fix the machine
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of getting a new one. They don’t realise the essence of recycling. And
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of all the pace of technology advancement is so fast, that
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year hardware is kind of obsolete.
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, people keep on purchasing a new phone every year which creates a lot of E-waste which is harder to deal with as it contains hard metals. So the state should take some actions for that, we’ll talk about it in the
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paragraph. It’s imperative that the regime of all the nations should come together to control
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issue because it’s a hard impact on our surroundings. The government can take various steps to regulate
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space. They can start imposing a rubbish tax on the corporations which are generating more junk. They can give allocate some incentives to companies which are eco-friendly and help in controlling
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issue so that other corporations get motivated to join
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cause and help in regulating it.
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, the government can start a campaign for recycling which educates masses. To summarise it, I must say that we all have to come together in order to battle
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issue. We’ve to do it to make our planet more habitable. So that our children can have a better future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Screen time
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Physical inactivity
  • Cognitive development
  • Internet addiction
  • Cyberbullying
  • Inappropriate content
  • Digital literacy
  • Virtual learning environments
  • Parental controls
  • Moderation
  • Online safety
  • Tech-savvy
  • E-learning
  • Information technology
  • Eye strain
  • Social skills
  • Multitasking
  • Interactive education
  • Health repercussions
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