There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays? Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence. You should write at least 250 words.

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is an inexpensive

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to spend leisure time, relax the mind, and release stress.

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, in

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contemporary world with changing lifestyle and technology, people's taste for

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changing. Earlier, people prefer to listen to traditional

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but nowadays under the influence of western culture, they started listening to international

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many may see it as a positive phenomenon, I believe

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trend leading us in the wrong directions and have a detrimental impact on our classical

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. On the one hand, traditional

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is a

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to keep us in touch with our culture and heritage values as well as make us gregarious. To be more specific,

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has the power to strengthen the social fabrics of any society by teaching individuals interpersonal skills, empathy,

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values, or mutual understanding.

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, our old Hindi traditional song "Zindgi Ek Safar" means"

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is a journey" teaches us the value of

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, harmony, and how to let go of someone without gracious. After listening to

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song, I started forgiving my friends for their mistakes in resulting, we have a strong bond.

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, traditional

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helps us to stay away from modern

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raps and jazz

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which is full of abusive words,

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, positive mind and overall well-being.

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, today's

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encouraging drugs, aggression, abusive language, and conflicts.

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, eminent singer Bohemia which is quite popular amongst the youth of the world, sing songs full of abusive language and drug advertisements. According to famous writer ARD Sandhu, " what we listen, we will be". So it's important to avoid

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some international

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tracks harm our moral values. It helps us to understand the culture, language of other overseas countries.

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music

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is the best

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to know about the behaviour of citizens of a particular nation,

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as their likes, dislikes,

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of living, mentality, and traditions, which may help countries to increase global harmony. To conclude, even though western

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has a few benefits as it helps us to learn new languages and enrich our knowledge about diverse cultures.

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, international

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is potentially dangerous for our cultural and heritage values.

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