Popular events like football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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It is argued that popular events like
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ootball World Cup that based on
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teams can stabilise patriotic emotions and international tensions in a safe way. I
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disagree with
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think
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events make nationalist people act more dangerously.
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of all
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believe a big international event can
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some fights and vandalisms and may increase
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patriotic emotions. At
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kind of big events, people from all the world come to support their national
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and if the
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lose, they get upset and angry with the
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opponent
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and their nation. We can see lots of examples of
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nearly every international sport cup. Especially, after big wins
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there is always an angry group of loser
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's supporter and they can
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some problems with the opponent
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's supporters.
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why international sport occasions are not easing international tensions in my opinion.
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, at the period of
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events
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some dangerous people can find
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lace to do something
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provocative
about important sensitive subjects. Because there are lots of people from all around the world outside they can reach their goal easily.
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, a racist person can do something
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in front of everyone that he or she
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on and
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a fight or something bad.
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, someone may use these events as an opportunity to harm a nation and
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doesn't help
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releasing
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patriotic emotions. To conclude,
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of big and international events can be enjoying and can cheer up the people but
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they may
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some patriotic and
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provocative
scenes more than easing international tensions.
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