Popular events like football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is argued that popular events like

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ootball World Cup that based on

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international

teams can stabilise patriotic emotions and international tensions in a safe way. I

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disagree with

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argument

and

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think

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events make nationalist people act more dangerously.

First

of all

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i

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believe a big international event can

cause

some fights and vandalisms and may increase

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patriotic emotions. At

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kind of big events, people from all the world come to support their national

team

and if the

team

lose, they get upset and angry with the

oppenent

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opponent

team

and their nation. We can see lots of examples of

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situation

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nearly every international sport cup. Especially, after big wins

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there is always an angry group of loser

team

's supporter and they can

cause

some problems with the opponent

team

's supporters.

That is

why international sport occasions are not easing international tensions in my opinion.

Secondly

, at the period of

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events

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some dangerous people can find

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lace to do something

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provocative

about important sensitive subjects. Because there are lots of people from all around the world outside they can reach their goal easily.

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, a racist person can do something

provacative

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provocative

in front of everyone that he or she

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on and

cause

a fight or something bad.

Thus

, someone may use these events as an opportunity to harm a nation and

this

doesn't help

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releasing

relating

patriotic emotions. To conclude,

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of big and international events can be enjoying and can cheer up the people but

on the other hand

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they may

cause

some patriotic and

provacative

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provocative

scenes more than easing international tensions.