The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010.

The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010.
The two pie charts illustrate the average
household
expenditures percentage-wise in 1950 and 2010 in a country.
Overall
, in the given
period
, the lowest contribution was made by the healthcare
sector
. At the beginning of the
period
, housing was the most significant
sector
. In comparison,
at the end
of the
period
food, housing and other services became the largest segments in outlay.
Food
Correct article usage
The food
show examples
sector
accounted for 11.2% of the
household
's expenditure in 1950 and experienced a more than two-fold increase to 34% in 2010.
Household
expenditure from healthcare was 2.4% in 1950 and had a slight growth of 2% in 2010. At the beginning of the
period
, transportation and other services spent up only 3.3% and 4.4% respectively, and these figures rose to 14% and 19.2% in 2010. Housing which comprised a quarter of
household
spending in 1950 fell to 22% in 2010. In 1950 the education
sector
was at 6.6% and decreased by 0.3% in 2010.
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