Children today are too dependent on computers and electronic entertainment. It would be better for them to be outside playing sports and taking part in more traditional pastimes than spending all day indoors. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Undoubtedly, a child's activity plays a crucial part in everyone's

growth

where they are growing and learning a lot of skills. Whereas, kids are spending more present on electronic gadgets these days

instead

of pastimes. offsprings are more likely to play indoor activities. Playing different kinds of activities

also

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better

growth

, future as well as to build social relations with others.

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, both have a positive and negative impact on

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ives. On the one hand, Adolescents spend more term on television, laptops, smartphones to play online games, etc which create a bad effect on them.

However

, it may lead to horrible results

such

as physical and psychological health. Apart from

this

, people are more strong and well socially connected with others because they spent ample age in outdoor activities.

For instance

, if youngsters spend more point on electronic techniques

then

they will be distracted from their relations, family values, etc.

Moreover

, they can not make an emotional bond with anyone as well as getting more depressed.

In addition

to it, they become socially isolated which affects the minor's growing

growth

period.

On the other hand

, the electronic appliance is commonly used in these days. It has

also

positive effects on human

growth

. At present, youth learn a different way of learning. As earlier discussed, individuals were not well exposed to electronic tools so they were not much educated along with less electronic knowledge. In conclusion, I certainly disagree with

this

statement because indoor activities implement a bad effect on minors.

Moreover

,they become socially distracted that will leads to health problems.