Many people believe that we should protect all wild animals while others believe we should just protect some of them.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Animal cruelty and hunting policies have been a heated topic of discussion in recent years. While more conservative people claim that hunting is part of their lifestyle and just a few species need to be protected, others argue that
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archaic practise causes more hard than good in the
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. Considering both sides of the discussion, I believe that we should protect all types of
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. It is known that human activities,
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as hunting, have impacted
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and brought many species to the brink of extinction creating imbalances in the
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's ecosystem.
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disparity not only impacts the environment but
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the food chain per se. Creating,
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, a proliferation of unwanted species in areas where they can be pernicious for people and production sites like farms.
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, in Brazil, with the eradication of snakes near crop areas, a proliferation of rodents took place, which ruined the plantation thereby caused a loss of product and revenue.
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, the protection of
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is essential to maintain a balance for which productivity is favourable. That being said, it has been proven that hunting is not necessary for modern society.
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, hunters and other adepts of
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practice state that it is part of their culture and subsistence;
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, they refuse to change and prefer to protect their personal interests.
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why governments ought to levy bills and regulations to prohibit
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practice for the effects of it brings complications to ecosystems and their productivity.
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, the federal government in Brazil made hunting illegal and has imposed heavy fines to prevent activities.
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, Brazil is one of the
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's leaders in the production of many commodities and leads the export of beans and fruits.
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, showing that the killing of animal life is not needed in today's
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. To conclude, the protection of
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is a delicate topic that diverges opinions.
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, I believe that the protection of animals is utterly necessary to maintain the balance of our ecosystems and that hunting, as an old practice, should be ceased to exist.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem
  • conservation status
  • ecological significance
  • holistic approach
  • endangered species
  • natural heritage
  • unforeseen negative impacts
  • economically non-viable
  • prioritization
  • ecosystem balance
  • conservation efforts
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