In recent years, more and more people tend to live individually. What are the causes of this trend? Does this have a positive or negative effect on society?

Modern lives have changed over the years and more individuals want to spend their life alone. Due to lack of
oppurtunity
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opportunity
in the home town more people move out of
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their respective cities and
c
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ost of living is pretty expensive in the
metropolitian
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metropolitan
towns which force them to live alone .
This
might have some negative impact on society as adult
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take care of old parents and need to give them to old
age
for well being .
Metropolitian
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Metropolitan
have big universities ,greater job requirement which
attract
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more individual ,
however
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expensive to live with family in the
metropolitian
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metropolitan
cities. cost of
one bedroom
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apartment in
the
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reasonable society is way more compare to
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c
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ountry side .
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can be
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ain reason why few adults can't afford living with parents in the urban area.
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a person working on minimum wage
such
as 10 $/hour can't spend 2000$ for 2 bedroom house in
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,
hence
they tend to live alone.
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of a person changes when they stay solo for
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ong time, they no longer feel the need
of
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families and tend to cut all ties .
This
effect society in
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egative way as old parents of a person look for their son or daughter to take care of them in old
age
. In lack of individual
resposibility
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responsibility
and above scenarios
this
gave birth to old
age
homes in
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rban area.
for example
, a
milleninal
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millennial
working alone in
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ig municipality cant take care
for
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their parents who
lives
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in countryside
hence
they ask them to live in old
age
homes. In conclusion, more population is bound to spend their day by oneself due to
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ost of living being high in the megacities.
this
have
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a destructive impact on
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n
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eighbour hood as parents require their son and daughter attention in old
age
,negligence of
this
caused the human to live alone in their old
age
Homes .
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