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In many countries today, crime novels ad TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and Tv crime dramas?

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Although
, in the past, the
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 of the novels and TV series were mainly about romance and drama, nowadays, the focus is in crime
history
 and investigation. These kinds of
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 when the American TV made series like Bones and Lie to me. Normally, the fans appreciate seeing the action, line of think and the drama involved in
this
plot
.
Besides
 the Hollywood industry are trying to involve the public with a
plot
 of fantasies and not reality as Game of Thrones, the true crime and investigation
history
 have a faithful audience. One of the
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 reason these narrative are
successuful
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successful
 is regarding the drama and brainstorm that some directors and authors can make.
Moreover
, when the
plot
 is well writing it have a knowledge of psychology and
the
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history
 can make the public think about the
history
 line.
Also
, most end of
this
 gender has a
plot
 twist that surprise the audience. I am a huge fan of true crime
history
 and police investigation, so in my opinion, these narrative are a great choice. The line of thinking and how the
plot
 most of the time search points of connection and
detalis
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details
 is one of favourite reason to see it.
However
, the industry is focusing
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 the same
plot
 and not being creative about news cases what it making the
plot
 sometimes boring and repetitive. To summarize, these kind of movies and series are becoming more popular,
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the industry is being monotonous, frustrating the audience.
Also
, is not every people who can watch it, because when the
history
 focuses on true cases it can show scenes containing blood and violence, so it is important always reading the abstract. I believe
this
plot
 has a lot of
potential
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 and we have classics as Dexter, Sherlock Holmes and Hannibal, that involve the public and have a great
plot
 twist on it.
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