Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you cannot go anymore Say who can go instead of you Say why this person is a good person to go with

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Dear Ria, I am writing in response to your invitation to watch a movie together in the theatre on 1st November. Unfortunately, I would not be able to attend on that day due to

Correct article usage

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unavoidable

circumstance

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circumstances

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. The fact is, suddenly my uncle has come to my home from the village. He is suffering from a neural disease and

required

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is required

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to visit a doctor immediately. We managed a neurologist's appointment on the same scheduled date. Mention able that, my uncle has no

such

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relatives in the city except me to accompany him in

this

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regard;

therefore

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, I must have to take the responsibility to attend him in the doctor's chamber.

However

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, my friend Tairan can accompany you to the cinema hall if you wish. I hope you will feel comfortable with her as she is very friendly and

also

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have an interest in watching romantic movies. I am sorry for

this

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inconvenience and hope you will take it easy. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours loving, Nipa

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

170 words

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