A University should accept male and female students equally in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?
Each year, universities decide on a number of graduates to
fulfill
the needs of the workforce. Some colleges think of equally accepting male and female students to study on their campuses. I strongly agree to a certain extent with the previous statement.
Nowadays, many girls are interested in continuing their higher education. The number of annual applicants is rising each year, with many women aspiring to attaining scholarships and studying in prestigious universities. Change the spelling
fulfil
For example
, in Egypt, many females are choosing to study engineering and medical sciences, there is a competition on the number of places available between males and their female counterparts. As a result
, universities’ administrations should accept the same figure of both genders in order to provide an equal opportunity for men and women.
There are many professions which do not suit women physically and mentally. They require a lot of physical strength to perform. For example
, construction work is not suitable for women at all. It would not be logical to hire women for such
jobs. However
, there are careers which are better be done by females. Teaching and nursing could be examples of these jobs. Therefore
, higher education institutes should accept a certain proportion of women according to the nature of the professions, due to the fact that these tasks cannot be performed by women and hiring men to do them is much more realistic and beneficial.
In conclusion, despite the fact that women play a crucial role in the ever-challenging workforce, it is important to admit that not all jobs are fit to be done by women because of its physical and mental requirements.Submitted by reemmagdysherif on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite