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Some people believe that excessive use of modern technologies, such as computers and smartphones, is negatively affecting the reading and writing skills of our young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Technology is not just a source of learning, but a solution to many problems. Computers and smartphones have drastically changed young minds. Earlier people were not aware of their surroundings but now you can easily update yourself through these gadgets.
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, newspaper or news channels were the only medium of all the current affairs taking place across the world. The moment computers and smartphone were introduced, accessibility to
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ews at any time in a day. Often, children need to visit libraries for books related to their syllabus. But now all you need is to do is sit and google on
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nternet, within few minutes you find all relevant material. Technology is an all in one tool for people. But as you know that excess of everything is bad,
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 one needs to know their limitations. A change in kids and adults behaviour can be seen. When you spend excess hours on these devices your social actually gets hampered. Children like playing games online due to which their physical activity reduces. My friend's child started gaining weight
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