In recent times, many people are making the decision to live alone. What are the causes of this? Does it have positive or negatives effects on society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

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to live a personal life without anyone. The main reason for

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they want to be independent because of that,

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might face many problems.

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has both positive as well as the negative impact on the community.

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and foremost reason for

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issue is young people do not want someone or even their parents interfere in their personal matter.

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to that, they want to be independent and do something that their guardian is not allowing. For an instance, famous Russian scientist James Walter started living by himself to do research on a drug because he was trying that medicine on him for trial.

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, to get a better opportunity by moving from the rural area to urban or even to the new country or city.

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, I am from India but now I am living alone in Canada without family or any relatives for the betterment of my future. On the other side,

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can feel depressed and homesickness because no

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is there to share your feeling or even to talk. To illustrate, according to the "Newyork Times" more than 5% of people migrate from

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place to another for their good future might get in depression and end up in any hospital.

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, in case of

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mergency,no

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is near you for help. In conclusion, I would like to conclude that it is better to live with your loved

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near you and

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can achieve anything with the support of the family.

Renish SavaliyaSat Oct 31 2020

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