A friend had invited you for a meal at his/her place. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter 1. Thank him/her for inviting you 2. Describe how you felt about his/her family members 3. Make suggestions about his/her visit to your place

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Dear Abhi, Hope you are doing well. I am writing to thank you from the bottom of my heart for having me at your home

last

week. It was really nice to meet your family and know more about your culture. I can'

express

you

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how touched I'm

with

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the sweet and caring gesture of your parents. As you are aware that I was going through a stressful time due to my professional and personal life.

Initially

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I was feeling a little awkward but

then

your family made it

such

a homely environment for me. It felt like my own home. I can'

thank you enough for the love your family showed me at your house. Even though the vibe at your place was so homely, believe

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I didn'

miss my family at all. Your mom is

such

a sweet person and I was so surprised to see my favourite cuisines at the dinner table that she made. I must tell you that you are very lucky to be with

such

a loving family member. I was wondering if you can visit my place

this

weekend or maybe the

one over dinner. I told my parents about the experience and they do want to meet you. Can'

wait to hear from you. Cheers! Sweta Singh

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

217 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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