Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

The manufacture of
garbage
in excess is a global concern. More and more countries across the globe have seen their rubbish production increase to almost an unmanageable quantity. The boost in
the
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society is a factor why rubbish is increasing.
However
, I believe that we can reduce the levels of
garbage
produced if companies and people receive financial incentives from governments. I believe that increase in the global
population
is the main reason for the
garbage
constantly grow. It is normal to assume that everyone needs a variety of goods and infrastructure to live.
This
means that more goods
such
as clothes, electronic gadgets, food, furniture and other items need to be produced to attend people’s needs. The more goods are produced to attend the demand, the more
garbage
it is going to be produced. As an example, China and India together have increased their
population
in around one billion people in the
last
decade,
this
led them to an industrial boost to be able to attend the demand for living infrastructure. To help
solving
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the
garbage
increasing production problem, governments should create financial incentives to companies and people who recycle their trash. If people receive money for each kilogram of recycled trash, they will do that. Governments can make new laws providing cash payments for the
population
who is disposing
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their
garbage
and reusable goods inappropriate places. Companies can
also
receive incentives on their tax payments by reducing 5% the amount of taxes they should pay.
This
only if they have a clear, consistent and continuous process of
garbage
recycling inside the company. All these rewarding measures would make people dispose of only of the real
garbage
and companies to create internal mechanisms of recycling. To conclude, the main cause of the increase in
garbage
production is the boost in world
population
.
However
, governments can create new laws to reward money for people who help to recycle and reducing taxes for companies who keep a functional policy for recycling within their installations.
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