An increasing number of children are overweight which could result many problems when they grow older both in terms of health and health care costs. Why do you think so many children are overweight? What could be done to solve this problem?

Science is advancing

everyday

Replace the word

every day

show examples

with leaps and bounds and everything surrounding human life is evolving each day. Genetically modified foods are the recent invention in

this

field and it has solved the problem of food scarcity. Some experts opine that we should endorse these foods at

h

Add an article

a

show examples

igher level, to pacify the expanding population need. There are certain pros and cons connected with it and I will be discussing them in the upcoming paragraphs.

First

of all, Genetically engineered crops have proved as a boon to every nation because they have created

a

Add an article

an

show examples

bundance of food stock and there will be no shortage in

u

Add an article

the

show examples

pcoming time.

Moreover

, lakhs of lives have been saved from the famine that use to happen in the past.

For example

, in India

Add a comma

,

show examples

around 30 million individuals lost their precious life in 1800-1899 and the British government had no remedy for it.

Secondly

, these crops take less time to grow and hybridization has caused them to grow bigger in size.

Consequently

, that brings more profit to the agriculture sector of the country. If

f

Add an article

the

show examples

arming sector is growing, that ultimately escalate the gross domestic product of the republic.

However

, there is

a

Remove the article

apply

show examples

another side of the coin too. These modern crops are much expensive as compared to traditional organic one’s and it causes

b

Add an article

a

show examples

unch of pressure on farmers.

In other words

, landlords have to spend money on fertilizers, pesticides ,and new machinery but their prices are exorbitant. It pushes the farmers in the debt trap.

Although

, they take help from the financial institutions and moneylenders

but

Remove the conjunction

apply

show examples

they have to suffer from a lot of exploitation. To conclude, it is worthwhile to say that these GM foods

is

Change the verb form

are

show examples

the need of

h

Add an article

the

show examples

our,

therefore

,

g

Add an article

the

show examples

eneral public should be taught how to use them wisely and efficiently. National governments should provide subsidy to agriculturists.