Surveys show that many people believe most jobs in the future will be done at home.Do you agree or disagree ?

In the
last
polls about how people see the future of job-market, the majority of people think that most of
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obs will have the possibility to be remote in the
next
years. I
am entirely disagree
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with
this
view because only a few industries could offer
this
benefit
such
as Education or technology support.
Conversely
, dominated industries which bring numerous employments across the world as Supply Chain, Logistics and
also
Medical Services cannot operate at home due to all the resources and international dependency that include it. In the era of rampant globalisation and the current pandemic, many people have forced to work at home in the
last
months.
Diferents
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Different
industries which jobs are related to education and office jobs had to did their duties as meetings, reports, lectures, and
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classes
via streaming.
For instance
, Universities and school from Australia have been evaluating the possibility to continue bringing online
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classes
in order to reduce administration cost and incorporate more students from overseas.
However
, parents and students are not totally happy with
this
new model. Many students claim that studying at home reduce their learning and performance.
On the other hand
,
this
new style of modern jobs
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not capable with all the jobs around the world. Indeed, Australia economic has
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largest dependency
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goods and manufacturing products which need a strong workforce to produce and deliver basic products.
Hence
, all these essential processes of supply chains needs, workers with different qualifications and practical skills. A number of engineers, technicians, farmers
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working despite all technologies advances which are part of people's lives but that in many cases cannot replace the human work. In conclusion, the globalisation has been changing many aspects of their people's lives, it could be that doctor can attend their patients via call or students have online
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classes
.
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there are many jobs which do not
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their features to follow
this
style.
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