Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter, A) Introduce yourself B) Explain what the problem is C) Suggest solutions

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my concern regarding the
noise
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in the street, which has recently been causing considerable inconvenience / raised serious concerns among residents.
Firstly
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, the problem is we are disturbed because of the
noise
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from street work, which makes it hard for us to focus or relax.
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, the final semester exam might be scheduled on Tuesday .
This
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is particularly problematic because if
noise
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is continued, it will cause disturbances, and it may lead to
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complications.
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, I have suggested that the work be done during less busy hours,
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as early mornings or late evenings. Despite some efforts, these measures seem insufficient to resolve the issue effectively.
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, I would appreciate it if you could take some action regarding
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. request ,
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as
noise
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pollution. Prompt action is crucial to prevent the situation from worsening. Thank you for your attention to
this
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matter. I look forward to your swift response. Yours faithfully, Adam

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coherence and cohesion
Make sure to separate your points clearly in different paragraphs to improve flow.
task achievement
Add more specific details about how the noise affects your daily life.
task achievement
Consider using a more formal tone throughout the letter.
task achievement
You clearly stated the issue and made a polite request for action.
coherence and cohesion
The letter has a good closing that invites a response.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite
Topic Vocabulary:
  • complaint
  • noise
  • work
  • street
  • disturbing
  • problem
  • suggest
  • solution
  • relax
  • focus
  • residents
  • advance
  • schedule
  • busy
  • hours
  • council
  • yourself
  • specific
  • hard
  • prepare
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