People are becoming dependent on the Internet and phone. Do the benefits of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In today's modern era technology plays an important role. People are getting

use

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to of

internet

and

phone

.

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dvantages and disadvantages of

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people who are becoming dependent on

internet

and

phone

. On the one hand , the main advantages of people's dependency on

phone

and

internet

are

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rend of social media and the

google

which helps people in various ways.

In other words

, due to

internet

and

phone

people are more aware

about

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the

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social information

such

as what are their friends

activites

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activities

. For

insance

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instance

, people

now-a-days

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checks in , post pictures and events on

facebook

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.

Additionally

, uses of

google

is another positive aspect of dependency on

phone

and

internet

is

google

works like it works as

s

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earch engine ,

google

map ,

google

fitness app helps people a lot in different ways.

on the other hand

, there are several drawbacks of people's dependency on

phone

and

internet

which are wastage of time ,

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train on eyes and getting wrong information by kids .

Firstly

,

phone

and

internet

takes

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a lot of time of people from their busy schedule as they are getting

use

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used

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to day by day due to latest apps .

for example

, because of

this

pandemic online classes increases the

use

of apps by students like zoom, cam scan etc .

Secondly

, continuously

use

of

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hone for a long time leads to strain on eyes .

further

, getting wrong content by kids from

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nternet which tend to increase the crime rate

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essay has discussed some positives and negatives of

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. To conclude while the benefits are numerous

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however

, the drawbacks should not be overlooked.