People are becoming dependent on the Internet and phone. Do the benefits of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In today's modern era technology plays an important role. People are getting

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people who are becoming dependent on

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. On the one hand , the main advantages of people's dependency on

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rend of social media and the

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which helps people in various ways.

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people are more aware

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social information

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, people

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checks in , post pictures and events on

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is another positive aspect of dependency on

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fitness app helps people a lot in different ways.

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, there are several drawbacks of people's dependency on

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which are wastage of time ,

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train on eyes and getting wrong information by kids .

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a lot of time of people from their busy schedule as they are getting

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to day by day due to latest apps .

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pandemic online classes increases the

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of apps by students like zoom, cam scan etc .

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, continuously

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hone for a long time leads to strain on eyes .

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nternet which tend to increase the crime rate

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essay has discussed some positives and negatives of

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, the drawbacks should not be overlooked.