Some people say that environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Increasing of animals and plants annihilation concerns a large group of people.
However
, others believe that there are more critical problems threatening our planet. Author believes as unfortunate as losing a unique amount of living creature is,
that is
not most important nor unpleasant environmental crisis happening in our times.
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fact and illustrate complex environmental challenges. Environmental changes, air and water pollution, uncontrolled hunting and man destroying wild animal’s territory vanish a large number of species and more are in immediate danger of elimination.
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losing of unique sets of gene and nature innovation concerns scientist who used to be inspirited by the other of nature to discover or invent millions of lives saving devices or medicines.
However
, the database is still available and data mining or artificial intelligence can generate more data and novelty. In fact, emphasis and propaganda come from more sentimental feeling and desire to simplify the ain problem. Comparing mainstream media silence about amazon fire and millions of advertises, posters and documentaries about cute panda bears extinction explains many things.
On the other hand
, some people believe global warming, increasing Ultra Violaceous (UV) waves, wide air, soil and water pollution, seawater height degree increasing and bacteria resistance are more complicated and critical problems that directly threaten human life and may cause human extinction itself. UV wave can increase the probability of getting cancer significantly and with the disappearing of the zone belt, more and more UV waves will reach the earth. The loss of particular species is an unpleasant effect of environmental changes.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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