Farming is the backbone of every country but nowadays many youngsters hesitate to enter this job. Some believe this is because other jobs are more alluring and lucrative. Others say it is because farming is an insecure job. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion.
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commodities. when the quality is low so nobody purchases these products leaving no money for farmers while other jobs salaries are mainly permanent.
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