Farming is the backbone of every country but nowadays many youngsters hesitate to enter this job. Some believe this is because other jobs are more alluring and lucrative. Others say it is because farming is an insecure job. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion.

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Agriculture
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plays a major role in every nation yet these days many young people are reluctant to enter
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profession. Some people argue that the reason behind
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is other jobs are not only more exciting but
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well-paid. While others, me included, believe farming insecurity is the main
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of
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. When trying to root
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hesitation some say that other jobs are more attractive than farming.
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, consider the workplace. Many jobs are indoor activity and are mainly in the office which is always clean and tidy having the pleasant smell of perfumes and coffee aromas while in farms are always messy having an unpleasant odour of muck around.
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, these people argue that other jobs income are more than
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due to the fact that the farming income highly depends on the quality of
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commodities. when the quality is low so nobody purchases these products leaving no money for farmers while other jobs salaries are mainly permanent.
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, Others argue that
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is a dangerous occupation including a lot of risks, depending on climate and environmental conditions. Usually, kids under 15-year-old and men over 65 years are likely to be injured or killed in farms,
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, Pesticides and herbicides can
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injuries
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as burns, respiratory illness or poisoning.
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, injuries inflicted by animals including bites, kicks and transmission of certain infectious disease could be other hazards.
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, climate changes may
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disaster in farms. When a storm hits a farm and ruin all the crops there is neither
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commodities nor money. So all of these hazards bring insecurity preventing youth to be farmers. In conclusion,
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agriculture
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is the most important industry in every country due to hazards and insecure conditions, many young people are unwilling to have
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job. Governments should encourage youth by providing financial incentives and academic training.
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