Certain parents believe that good parenting means constantly being involved in the lives of their children. While some parents believe it is better for the development of their children if they learn to deal with situations by themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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that good parenting is regularly participate in
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lives.
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, others argue that children better solve their own problem in order to build their self-development.
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my stance, both the viewpoints would be discussed in
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essay and try to reach its conclusion. Examining the former opinion, the
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argument put forward is that involved in every children matter means
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good parenting. In
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, mother and father take responsibilities of all children activities and abilities
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as motoric, social and
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skill.
This
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immense
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influence on children's development, especially in young age and their social life in the future.
Moreover
, younger's characters are attributed to the parents. To elaborate, every
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behaviour
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and language, and act that daughters and sons do, it is created by their
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educations. If parents do not
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, they would have rudimentary
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behaviours
behaviour
in the future.
However
, the opponents of
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view assert that it is the best way to let every
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solved by children in order to learn
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build their self-development.
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is to say that youngers need to go out from
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amily circle to gain more experiences because children learning by doing.
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, it is necessary early learner learn to build their own social life which
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should
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begin since their primary age.
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means interaction with people out of their family stimulate their brain and abilities to learn new things and manage
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best way.
As a result
, children will grow up made by their experience critical intellectual
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as communication skill. sympathy and empathy. To conclude and give my opinion, I support the opponent
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to a great extend. All children need to learn
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solve any situations by themself without any parents control in order to support their development.
Nonetheless
, parents should support
this
point of view because children need to learn.
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