A friend told you recently that he/she had gone to an excellent restaurant. You wonder if this restaurant will be suitable for your birthday party next week. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter tell your friend about your planned party ask what the restaurant is called and for directions to get there ask what kind of food it serves and if your friend has any particular recommendations from the men

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Dear Zachary, I hope you are doing great. It was good to hear from you
last
week about your fabulous experience at the restaurant for your family dinner. I am writing
this
letter to get more information about the restaurant, as I am thinking of throwing my birthday party there. As you know, my 22nd birthday is coming next week. I do not have much time left, and I am trying to find a suitable place for the celebration. I want a retro-themed party. Though I am going to invite only close friends and family, I am looking for a place that not only serves me well but is
also
budget-friendly for me. Can you please tell me the name of the place and how I can reach it? I am
also
wondering about their menu. What type of service do they provide? Any suggestions for my menu would make my life easier. Looking forward to catching up soon. Until
then
, take care. Warm Regards, Xxx
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The letter could include more details on the type of food preferences for the party to better inform the recipient.
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Adding any particular reason for choosing a retro theme might add an interesting personal touch.
coherence cohesion
The letter has a well-organized structure, with each paragraph focused on a distinct point.
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The tone of the letter is appropriate and friendly, matching the purpose of the communication.
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The letter successfully communicates the purpose and requests the necessary information in a direct yet polite manner.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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