Too much money is spent by individuals and governments on making themselves and the areas they live in look beautiful. This is wasteful and it has no useful purpose. Instead, the money should be spent on improving individuals health . Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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modern era, people are getting more influenced by celebrities. They want to get those perfect toned bodies and flawless skin. People in authority are

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focusing too much on the development of areas by spending lavishly.

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, these huge sums can be used

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the betterment of

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-related facilities. I fully concur with the notion and will elaborate

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. Mean and women are so obsessed with their appearance these days.

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insecurity ends up costing huge amounts of money. They tend to opt for skin and body treatments in order to look perfect and well-toned.

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, anti-age treatments, liposuction, fillers are the rising trends of modern civilisation. Along with

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, humans don't shy to buy those expensive make-up products.

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, these businesses are rising like a wildfire.

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that, governments are

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focused on improving the outer beauties of an area, rather than eradicating actual problems.

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, India is one of the developing nations. The ruling parties are building more and more statues, in memory of some old leaders. The wealth spent on these is totally waste if common people are not even getting medicines and basic

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facilities.

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etter quality of life, if the financial resources are invested wisely for enhancing

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care facilities. To illustrate, a person can buy a treadmill in order to stay fit. Beauty fades away with time, but a person's good

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is obviously more precious.Money spent on a treadmill or other fitness machines will surely give numerous benefits. Apart from that, the government should spend more on

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care centres,hospital facilities and yoga centres for the well-being of their residents. To conclude, I would say that definitely people and government should consider

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as a priority. Wasting resources on something like beauty that will fade away no matter what

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is not a good move.

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, good

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facilities will lead to a rise in

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verage age of humans across the world.