The prevention of health problems and health illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree?

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with an
opportunity
to tell you how my skills and ideas can benefit your requirements. Regarding my working experience, I have over three years of working in various educational environments including 2 years of being an Apprentice teacher, 1 year of being a work-camp organizer in a foundation in Poland, and 1 year of being an English Teacher. I would be able to handle a class by preparing class materials, classroom management, and lesson planning. Meanwhile, my working experience provides a probability to coordinate with senior teachers and curriculum designers in the revamping of the aforementioned aspects. I have been intrigued by the benefits of
this
opportunity
since I read the details on your website. Throughout my time at university, I am extensively impressed by how innovative teaching methods at International University have significantly enhanced students' knowledge acquisition.
Therefore
, I desire to pursue my
career
in education; applying for
this
position
is the initial step to achieve my
career
goal because I am currently seeking a suitable
position
in a youthful, energetic, fast-paced environment which could allow me to discover my potential in the field and utilize my knowledge. I hope that by undertaking
this
position
I would be able to polish my teaching skills.
This
also
allows me to develop a better understanding of the underlying principles and applications of teaching techniques that are particularly useful for my desired
career
path.
Furthermore
, I would be able to network with other fellow teachers and
this
is
also
my great
opportunity
to receive helpful advice as well as sharing valuable experiences with one another. Communicating with other people would benefit me enormously.
For example
, it could help me to solve my own problems relating to my confusion or my future
career
. Being a hard-working and fast learner, I am confident that I can take advantage of
this
opportunity
that I have dreamed of to
further
my knowledge and skills and ultimately achieve my
career
goal. With a hardworking habit, a strong sense of responsibility, and a flexible schedule, I believe that I would be an excellent candidate for
this
position
within your requirements.
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