Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion
There has long been highly controversial about whether high-end technology improves trading commodities and services more convenience or not. In my own perspective, I partially agree with the former view and sell and purchase anything in their concerned,
this
essay is going to cast light on both aspects of this
issue.
On the one side, thanks to the proliferation of cutting-edge technology has
paved the way for online market and trading commodities platform. With some click and press button on Change the verb form
have
o
nline commercial trading platform, people can search as far asAdd an article
the
an
Add the preposition
to
instead
of having to go around and do the window shopping in the
previous way. The fact that online shopping not only saved the amount of time of both customers and sellersChange the article
a
,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
curb the flow of traffic, especially in the flash or sale days. For example
, in The United States decade ago, the image of a queue of people, who sitting
in front of the gate of supermarkets or malls waiting for the open time to Change the form of the verb
sit
picked
up the flash sales commodities in Black Friday occasion is common. Change the form of the verb
pick
Nonetheless
, it phenomenon has been eased in recent years, due to the fast pace of cyber shopping. Thus
, the developing and widespread of
online shopping is inevitably unstoppable.
On the flip side, despite the convenience and comfort of purchasing and selling on cyberspace. There are several drawbacks Verify preposition usage
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of
Verify preposition usage
to
this
method. For instance
, to check the real quality and quantity of goods ordered, clients will have to wait a few days, until the logistics company transport and give it to their hand. Moreover
, if the characteristic of p
roduct has received not exactly or Add an article
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similarly
with the advertisement, clients need to report to the customer services and continually waiting more than a few days to receive pending results. Therefore
, stores and physical shops can be taken advantage of the prestigious and quality to keep up with loyal customers in the keen competition with online stores.
In conclusion, it is obvious/conspicuous/manifest that the developing and widespread of
online shopping is apparently unavoidable. Verify preposition usage
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Nevertheless
, having been taken advantage of prestigious and quality, stores and physical shops can remained
unchanged and keep pace with online platform.Change the verb form
remain
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