Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion

There has long been highly controversial about whether high-end technology improves trading commodities and services more convenience or not. In my own perspective, I partially agree with the former view and

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issue. On the one side, thanks to the proliferation of cutting-edge technology

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paved the way for online market and trading commodities platform. With some click and press button on

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nline commercial trading platform, people can search as far as

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sell and purchase anything in their concerned,

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of having to go around and do the window shopping in

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previous way. The fact that online shopping not only saved the amount of time of both customers and sellers

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but

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curb the flow of traffic, especially in the flash or sale days.

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, in The United States decade ago, the image of a queue of people, who

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in front of the gate of supermarkets or malls waiting for the open time to

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up the flash sales commodities in Black Friday occasion is common.

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, it phenomenon has been eased in recent years, due to the fast pace of cyber shopping.

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, the developing and widespread

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online shopping is inevitably unstoppable. On the flip side, despite the convenience and comfort of purchasing and selling on cyberspace. There are several drawbacks

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method.

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, to check the real quality and quantity of goods ordered, clients will have to wait a few days, until the logistics company transport and give it to their hand.

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, if the characteristic of

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roduct has received not exactly or

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with the advertisement, clients need to report to the customer services and continually waiting more than a few days to receive pending results.

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, stores and physical shops can be taken advantage of the prestigious and quality to keep up with loyal customers in the keen competition with online stores. In conclusion, it is obvious/conspicuous/manifest that the developing and widespread

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online shopping is apparently unavoidable.

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, having been taken advantage of prestigious and quality, stores and physical shops can

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unchanged and keep pace with online platform.